I'II play jump rope.

[emily]

Lead : I'II play jump rope.

Where : I'II play jump rope  at the playground.

How : I'II play jump rope  at the playground with my brother.

When : I'II play jump rope  at the playground with my brother tomorrow.

Situation : There will be many other people who were play jump rope.

Result : I'II be very tired. So I'II want to wash my face.

Feeling : I'II be very happy.  it will be very hard but i will  very healthy.

Will : i will play jump rope everyday. Because I want to be healthy.

                                       - After Revising-                                       

I'II play jump rope  at the playground with my brother tomorrow.

There will be many other people who were play jump rope.

 I'II be very tired. So I'II want to wash my face.

 I'II be very happy.  it will be very hard but i will  very healthy.

i will play jump rope everyday. Because I want to be healthy.

[Robin(김희경)]

Hi~~ How are you doing? Overall it's good. But this one "There will be many other people who were playing a jump rope." "but I will be very healthy." Have a good day~~~

[Swan]

와..진짜 건강해 지겠다..*^^*