<p>늦어서 미안...</p><p> </p><p>In virginia, there was an incident about sextual immorality. An 8 years old girl,Sunnie kahle, was withdrawn from her christian school after administrators complained that her appearance was not like feminine. Although she wanted to have a short haircut and weared a T-short and jeans, she understands the bible and knows it very well. Especially she has accepted chirst. Administrator of christian school said she had some bahavioral issues in school. However, her grandmother said she had only disciplinary issue that she want to wear boy's pant.</p><p> </p><p> </p><p>In virginia, there was an incident about sextual immorality. An 8 years old girl,Sunnie kahle, was withdrawn from her christian school after administrators complained that her appearance was not like feminine. Although she want to have a short haircut and wear a T-short and jeans, she understands the bible and knows it very well. Especially she has accepted chirst. Administrator of christian school said she had some bahavioral issues in school. However, her grandmother said she had only disciplinary issue that she want to wear boy's pant.</p><p> </p><p> </p>
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첫댓글1. sextual → sexual 2. 2번째 문장에서 feminine 은 형용사로 밖에 쓰이지 않아서 like앞에 쓸 수 없어요. 그냥 like를 생략하고 써도 무방할 것 같아요 3. 3번째 문장에서 she want에 s 가 빠지셧어요 4. 6번째 문장에서 administrator 앞에 특정학교의 관리자니까 관사 the 가 붙어야할 것 같아요. 5. 마지막 문장 she want to wear boy's pant에서 wanted 가 적절할 것같아요 6. 남성다운 행동이 크리스찬 학교 측에서 종교적인 부분에 위배된다고 생각하고 학생을 퇴출한 사실이 논란인것이 이 글의 주요 내용인데 성적모욕적인 사건이라고 칭하는 것은 주제에서 벗어나는 표현인 것 같아요
첫댓글 1. sextual → sexual
2. 2번째 문장에서 feminine 은 형용사로 밖에 쓰이지 않아서 like앞에 쓸 수 없어요. 그냥 like를 생략하고 써도 무방할 것 같아요
3. 3번째 문장에서 she want에 s 가 빠지셧어요
4. 6번째 문장에서 administrator 앞에 특정학교의 관리자니까 관사 the 가 붙어야할 것 같아요.
5. 마지막 문장 she want to wear boy's pant에서 wanted 가 적절할 것같아요
6. 남성다운 행동이 크리스찬 학교 측에서 종교적인 부분에 위배된다고 생각하고 학생을 퇴출한 사실이 논란인것이 이 글의 주요 내용인데
성적모욕적인 사건이라고 칭하는 것은 주제에서 벗어나는 표현인 것 같아요