Re: Max&Ruby(Grace)

[Teacher Winget]

Today, Max and Ruby were preparing for a tea party. While Ruby was making a flower basket, Max was playing with a frog. But they had to go to Grandmother's house, and Max didn't want to go. Max wanted to play with the frog all day. So, Max took the frog with him. But Ruby heard the frog's crying sound croaking sound. Ruby refused to take the frog. Max was so sad. While Max and Ruby were going to Grandmother's house, the frog chased them. When they arrived at Grandmother's house, Max was still sad. Then, Grandmother came and brought the frog, and Max felt so happy. I think Grandmother made Max feel good.

Score: A-

Tips)

1. 문법: "crying sound" 대신 "croaking sound"이라고 하면 더 정확해요.
2. 내용 추가: "Max는 왜 개구리와 계속 놀고 싶었을까요? 개구리와의 우정이 그 이유일 수도 있어요!"