<p>The title of the story is <b>"Caillou Goes Shopping."</b><br>Caillou's mom told Caillou that she <b><s>makes</s></b> <b>was going to make</b> a special surprise cake.<br>So Caillou, Rosie, and Caillou's mom went to the <b><s>mart</s></b> <b>store</b> to <b><s>go</s></b> grocery shopping.<br>Caillou's mom was grocery shopping, and Caillou tried to put cookies in the cart, but Caillou's mom said that cookies were not needed for <b><s>special surprise cakes</s></b> <b>the special surprise cake</b>.<br>While Caillou's mom was doing the grocery shopping and paying for it, Caillou also wanted to buy cookies, so <b><s>she</s></b> <b>he</b> got lost while looking for cookies.<br>But Caillou's mom <b><s>looked for Kayu</s></b> <b>found Caillou</b> and soothed Caillou, who was crying.<br>Then Caillou's mom said, "Let's make the special surprise cake into the shape of a snowman."<br>The book is very interesting.</p><p><b>Score: A-</b></p><p><b>Tips:</b></p><ol style="list-style-type: decimal;" data-ke-list-type="decimal"><li><b>'makes'는 'was going to make'로 고쳐야 해요.</b></li><li><b>'mart'는 'store'로 더 자연스러워요.</b></li><li><b>'She'는 'he'로 고쳐서 Caillou를 가리키는 대명사로 맞춰야 해요.</b></li></ol>
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