[Corrected] Dining together after work

[Jim Lee]

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Yesterday when I got to as soon as the bus to go home after work, my co-worker who lives near my house and 50 called me to meet somewhere. He said he wanted to drink beer to make good relationship with me. I also said to him "That's a good idea." When we met at a small pub after a while, we promised to drink one beer each as usual. As we were talking about many things, senior co-worker, life style and job etc, we forgot to make promise each other. As a result, we drank much beer and then went another beer house. I think that it was a great party except drinking much.	Yesterday, when I got to as soon as the bus stop to go home after work, my co-worker who lives near my house and 50 called me to meet somewhere. He said he wanted to drink beer with me to get to know each other better make good relationship with me. I also said to him "That's a good idea."agreed to meet him. When we met at a small pub after a while, we promised to drink one beer each as usual. As we were talking about many things such as our, senior co-worker, life style, and job etc, we forgot about our promise to make promise each other. As a result, we drank much beer and even then went to another pub beer house. I think that it was a great party except for drinking too much.
Comment: Great work!  Personal Comment: I guess when one drink goes into the body….it just doesn’t want to stop. :-)