Pork cutlet

[Byung Hyun An]

Question : What did you do yesterday?

Wednesday,June 17,2009 <Title : Pork cutlet>

Lead : I ate pork cutlet.

Where : I ate pork cutlet in my house.

How : I ate pork cutlet in my house with my family.

When : I ate pork cutlet in my house with my family yesterday.

Situation : There was a lot of food.

Result : It was very yummy.

Feeling : I was very happy. because it was very delicious.

Will : I will eat noodles next time.

My favorite food is noodles.

<After Revising>

I ate pork cutlet in my house with my family yesterday.

There was a lot of food.

It was very yummy. So I ate a lot.

I was very happy. because it was very delicious.

I will eat noodles next time.

My favorite food is noodles. 

[Robin(김희경)]

Wow~~~ It's fantastic~~~ You did a good job~~~ I guess you like to eat noodles so much~~~