Re: Caillou summary (Yulia)

[Teacher Winget]

The title of this book is "Caillou Goes Shopping."
It was snowing, and Caillou wanted to make a snowman.
Caillou started to eat cereal, but there 's was no cereal. So Mom said, "We will go shopping, and we will buy eggs too, because I will make a special surprise cake."
Caillou and Rosie was were happy. Caillou likes to go shopping.
Caillou, Rosie, and their mom go shooping went shopping.
When they go shopling were shopping, Caillou wanted to sit on in the cart like Rosie. So Caillou sit on sat in the cart like Rosie.
Caillou wanted to buy cookies, but Mom has had to make the special surprise cake.
When his mom paid, Caillou still wanted to buy cookies. Caillou was losting got lost and was afraid.
But his mom found him. Caillou was happy to see his mom and Rosie.
When they were at home, Mom made the special surprise cake. Caillou decorated the cake like a snowman.
They ate the special surprise cake deliciously happily!

Score: A-

Tips:

1. 'was losting' 대신 'got lost'가 더 자연스러워요.
2. 'Was'는 'were'로 고쳐야 해요 when talking about Caillou and Rosie together.
3. 'Deliciously' 대신 'happily'가 더 자연스러워요.