Re: 이상민

[Teacher1]

Caillou plays paino → played piano with his sister.

They are enjoy → enjoyed the playground piano.

Subbenly → Suddenly, his mom sugestion at cailliou
→ suggested to Caillou,
“Do you want to draw a picture on the paper?”

Caillou and his sister enjoy the do that
→ enjoyed doing that.

Caillou said to his sister,
“Give me that pencil.”

Caillou’s sister said, “No!”
Caillou trise still → tried to steal her pencil.
She cried loudly.

Caillou’s mom hear this sound → heard the sound.
Caillou’s mom enter cailliou room
→ entered Caillou’s room
and see a situation → saw what happened.

His mom reconciles → helped Caillou and his sister make up.

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Score: C+

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Tips)

• 맞춤법: paino → piano, subbenly → suddenly, trise → tried, still → steal 등 정확한 철자에 주의해요!

• 과거형: 이야기니까 plays → played, hear → heard, see → saw처럼 과거형을 써야 해요.

• 문장 정리: 긴 문장은 나눠서 쓰면 훨씬 더 이해하기 쉬워요!

상민이 아주 잘했어요! 작은 다툼과 화해의 장면을 잘 표현했어요 😊🎹🖍️💕

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