Re: Jadoo summary (Ruby)

[Teacher Winget]

Jadoo read a Genie genie story. She wanted to get a magical lamp.

She found looks like lamp something that looked like a lamp. She rubbed a lamp the lamp.

Suddenly, an old man appered appeared. His name was Genie.

Jadoo said , "Genie, i I want so get me you to get me a bicycle!"

After a while, Genie brought an old bicycle. Jadoo was sad.

Next, Jadoo said , "I want money!" Genie gave her money. Jadoo was happy.

Actually, Genie was her grandfather. Jadoo's Mom mom said , "Thank you."

Score: A-

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I는 항상 대문자로 써요.
looked like처럼 과거형을 써요.
someone, something 같은 단어를 사용하면 문장이 더 자연스러워요.
마지막에 “왜 할아버지가 그렇게 했는지” 한 문장 더 써 보세요!