[Corrected] My old boy’s wedding ceremony

[Jim Lee]

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I went to my old boy’s wedding ceremony yesterday, which took place in the DAWOO Construction Company’s wedding hall. It is very hard to have a meeting with my university’s old boys because most of them are working for the Construction Company and many civil engineering’s construction sites locate in the locality. It was much pleasant to meet many old boys. One of my professors officiated at the wedding. He was very infamous to the students because it was very hard to get a good grade in his class. The bridegroom looked very happy and the bride was very beautiful. There were quite a few participants of the wedding ceremony. After having a meal, we were obliged to break up because most of them should come back their work place.	I went to my old boy’s wedding ceremony yesterday, which took place in the DAWOO Construction Company’s wedding hall. It is very hard to have a meeting with my university’s old boys because most of them are working for the Construction Company and many civil engineering’s construction sites are located in the suburbs locality. It was much pleasant to meet many old boys. One of my professors officiated at the wedding. He was very infamous to the students because it was very hard to get a good grade in his class. The bridegroom looked very happy and the bride was very beautiful. There were quite a few participants at of the wedding ceremony. After having a meal, we were obliged to break up because most of them had to should come go back to their work places.
Comment: Excellent writing!  Personal Comment: I guess this is the season for wedding.  Maybe you will be next.