[Corrected] Introduce my family

[Jim Lee]

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My family is farther, mother, two elder sisters and one younger sister and one younger brother. My farter is 65 year-old. He worked for a auto engineer for all his life. My mother is 61 year-old. This year she's 60th birthday anniversary. My three sisters are married. My first elder sister has a two children. She lives in Gongreung-dong. My second elder sister has a one child. She lives in Suwon. My younger sister has no child. Because she's newly-married. She has worked for a shipping company. She lives in near my home. My younger brother graduated from college this year and he would like to study a computer program. So, he goes to a computer academy. Before I think that we have a big family, but now, I don't think that. Thesesdays, I much think that my family is more precious. I would like to well treat my family.	There is my father, mother, two elder sisters, a younger sister and a younger brother in my family.  My family is farther, mother, two elder sisters and one younger sister and one younger brother. My farter father is 65 years-old. He worked for as an auto engineer for all his life. My mother is 61 years-old. This year she will celebrate her 61st birthday she's 60th birthday anniversary. All of Mmy three sisters are married. My first elder eldest sister has a two children. She lives in Gongreung-dong. My second elderest sister has a one child. She lives in Suwon. My younger sister has no children. Bbecause she's newly-married. She has worksed for a shipping company. She lives in near my houseme. My younger brother graduated from college this year and he would like to study a computer programming. So, he goes to a computer academy. Before I used to think that we hadve a big family, but now, I don't think like that anymore. Thesesdays, I much think that my family is more precious than anything else in my life. I would like to well treat my family well.
Comment: Great writing!  Personal Comment: I guess having a big family is nice after all the children have grown up.  :-)