Re: 까이유 주말과제:김동휘(Harry)

[Teacher1]

The title of the story is "Caillou Grows Carrots."
Caillou was growled carrot grew carrots.

And the carrot was full-grown grew fully.

Caillous family Caillou's family harvested the carrots

and cooked carrot soup.

Score: B-

Tips):

1. 문법 팁:

   • "Caillou was growled carrot"는 틀린 표현이에요. Caillou grew carrots로 고쳐야 해요.
   • "Carrot was full-grown"은 The carrot grew fully처럼 더 자연스럽게 표현할 수 있어요.
   • "Caillous family"는 Caillou's family로 수정해야 맞춤법이 맞아요.

2. 스토리 팁:

   • 가족이 당근 수프를 만드는 과정에서 어떤 일이 있었는지 더 추가하면 재미있어요! 예: "가족이 함께 수프를 만들며 즐거운 시간을 보냈어요."
     (Adding more about the family’s time together can make the story more engaging!)