Hello, Bale :-) Happy to see you again!
Thank you for delivering a presentation in Monday euphony class.
For your better presentation, I remain some comments for you as follows.
<Check pronunciation>
*Ending sound was weak:
tol[d] / intend[ed]
*Unclear sound:
[r]est / [r]oyal / [f]ather / Re[p]lied / [visit] / [tr]uth
*Missed sound:
Intruder[s]
# Wear a smile on your face on a stage to make audience feel comfortable
# [the]/[this]/[there]/[them]/[they] - [th]sound in these words are also sounded like any other [th] sound
Bale, you are a man of rich and deep voice kkk! I thoroughly enjoyed your jaw-dropping presentation. Your pronunciation and accent are great enough to arrest people`s attention.
I think you are apt at delivering a presentation with confidence. Good job! I give you some of advices for better performance. All of parts were really good. But while you were speeching dialog parts, the intonation of those sentences was quite awkward sound like Korean. Try to put your emotion into the part. Stick to do it like this.
I am looking forward to your next presentation. Thank you again J
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