[Corrected] Oh, My eletronic dictionary...^^

[Jim Lee]

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8 months ago, I bought the electronic dictionary to study the english. After long consideration, I decided to buy the CASIO dictionary, EW-K2000. Especially, It was very convenient to write in english. I used to carry the dictionary in my bag for a long time. But I lost it in commute bus. I've already been accustomed to using my electonic dictionary. I could not use my paper dictionary, beacause of its inconvenience. Finally, again, I bought the my electronic dictinoary of the same model !!! Oh, my money... It cost as much as two hundred ten thousand won....!!! I decied that I always had caution in moving.	8 months ago, I bought an the electronic dictionary to study the eEnglish. After a long consideration, I decided to buy the CASIO dictionary, EW-K2000. Especially, It was very helpful when I write convenient to write in eEnglish. I used to carry the dictionary in my bag for a long time. Bbut I lost it in a commute bus. I've already become been accustomed to using my electronic dictionary. I can could not use my paper dictionary anymore because , beacause of its inconvenience. Finally, again, I bought an the my electronic dictinoary of the same model !!! Oh, my money... It cost as much as two hundred ten thousand won....!!! I decided that I will always be cautious had caution in moving with this one.
Comment: Good work!  Take a good look at my corrections and see if you can do better next time.  Personal Comment: I hope you take good care of this one.

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Thank you for your corrections...!!!