Re: Link unit2-Sofia Oh

[Sub tutor 1]

The title of this story is "Candy Making."
Lollopops Lollipops, marshmallows, and caramels are made using the same process.
Disolve Dissolve sugar and bring the mixture to a boil.

Before the invention of the thermometer, candy makers test tested the tamperature temperature by dropping the sugar mixture into cold water.

When the proper hardness is reached, flavoring can be added.
Then poor pour the mixture into a mold.
Whem When it cools, remove the molds and eat it.

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Score: Ao

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Tips)

• Lollopops → Lollipops, Disolve → Dissolve, tamperature → temperature는 철자 실수예요.

• poor는 ‘가난한’이고, 액체를 붓는다는 뜻은 pour예요.

• test → tested: 과거 이야기니까 -ed를 붙여야 해요.

• Whem → When, cool → cools처럼 단어는 정확히 쓰고, 주어에 따라 동사도 바꿔야 해요.

• eat it처럼 문장을 마무리하는 것도 중요해요. 그래야 독자가 이해하기 쉬워요!