Re: Read it summary Charlotte

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On November 1869 November 6, 1869, the first game of American football was played by two college teams.
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날짜는 월+일+년도 순서로 써요.

Players mainly use used their hands.
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과거 이야기라서 used로 써요.

Although both games are very intense. Both games are very intense.
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Although는 뒤에 문장이 더 필요해요.

Rugby Players players wear safety equipment.
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players는 일반명사라서 소문자로 써요.

They use their hands too.
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문장이 잘 되었어요 👍

That's why they loved are loved by so many people around the world.
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사람들에게 사랑받는다는 뜻이라서 are loved를 써요.

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과거 이야기인지 지금 이야기인지 생각하고 동사를 써요!
Although는 뒤에 문장을 꼭 이어서 써야 해요 😊