Re: Max and Ruby Ethan

[Teacher Winget]

Ruby and Louise practiced were practicing singing and played playing the piano.

While they practiceing practicing, Ruby had got hiccups.

Max wanted to find monster his monster mask, but Ruby didn't listen to him.

So they saw looked at a book to see how to stop hiccups.

They tried to stop the hiccups, but the hiccups didn't stop.

So Louise offered suggested to Ruby lied lie on the sofa, but Ruby keeped kept hiccups.

Max repeated kept trying to find the monster mask, but the monster mask didn't appear to him show up.

Suddenly, grand mother Grandmother came to Ruby's house.

Ruby opened door the door, and grand mother Grandmother scared them.

Finally, Ruby's hiccups were stopped stopped.

Score: A

Tips:

• 'practiceing'는 'practicing'으로 고쳐야 해요.
• 'keeped'는 'kept'로 고쳐야 자연스럽습니다.
• ‘grand mother’는 하나로 붙여서 'Grandmother'로 써야 해요.
• ‘Louise suggested that Ruby lie on the sofa'처럼 문장을 고치면 더 자연스럽게 들립니다.