[Jim's Correction] Re:A survival game

[Jim Lee]

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As of today, I finished 예비군. So I was really tired... Hot weather made me exhausted more than any other. But I did very interesting trainning in 예비군. It is a survival game. We organized two teams. One team is attack and the other team is defense. It used gas gun and we wore protective gears. I was really surprised by this trainning because I didn't experience this before. When we excersied, all of the guys conducted without sincerity. But after we received rubber balls, everyone moved fast and alterly. I thought at that time all of the people were changed by urgent situation. That is why we feel a pain when we are hit the ball. It is likely that our mind depends on the attitude of mind....	As of today, I finished 예비군. So I am was really tired... Hot weather made me become exhausted more than anything else other. But I did something very interesting at trainning in 예비군 training. It is I participated in a survival game. We organized two teams. One team is attacked while and the other team defended themselves is defense. We It used gas guns and we wore protective gears. I was really surprised by this type of training trainning because I have not didn't experienced this before. When we exercised excersied, all of the guys conducted without much effort sincerity. But after we received the rubber balls, everyone moved fast and alertly alterly. I thought at that time that the action of all of the people were changed by an urgent situation. Theat reason is because why we felt feel a pain when we were are hit by the ball. It is likely that our mind depends on the attitude of mind....
Comment: Excellent writing….Survival game…sounds like fun!