a stray cat

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Q : What did you do yesterday?

Tuesday, September 22, 2009

<Title : a stray cat>

Lead : I saw a stray cat.

       나는 보았다 길 고양이를.

where : I saw a stray cat in the street.

        나는 보았다 길 고양이를 거리에서.

How :  I saw a stray cat in the street by my self.

      나는 보앗다 길 고양이를 거리에서 나 혼자서.

When :  I saw a stray cat in the street by my self yesterday.

       나는 보았다 길 고양이를 거리에서 나 혼자서 어제.

Situation : It was very small so it looked weak.

             그것은 매우 작고, 약하게 보였다.

Result : I gave it some food.

         나는 주었다 약간의 음식을.

Feelimg : I was vert happy bceause I helped the stray cat.

          나는 매우 행복했다 왜냐하면 길 고양이를 도와주었기 때문이다. 

Will : I will play with the stray cat next  time. 

     나는 다음에 길 고양이를 놀아줄것이다.

<After Revising>

I saw a stray cat in the street by my self yesterday.

It was very small so it looked weak.

I gave it some food.

I was vert happy bceause I helped the stray cat.

I will play with the stray cat next  time.