Re: Caillou summery Isabella

[Teacher Winget]

The book's title is "Caillou in the Bathtub."
Caillou doesn't didn't like bathtub taking baths. So Caillou hide hid under the Roise's bed Rosie's bed. But mommy find found Caillou in there there. Mommy took Caillou into the bathroom, and Caillou Caillou Caillou ran away again, but bumped bumping into his dad and ended up back ended up in the bathroom again. So Caillou ended up going went into the bathtub to take a bath. Later, Caillou brought the a duck with him, and they had fun playing with it. When Caillou didn't want to go out get out, his mommy wiped him and said he would do it again tomorrow. After I read this book, I thought Caillou hated bathing itself, but he hated just being just hated being in water and loved playing with bubbles and taking a bath.

Score: B

Tips:

1. 'doesn't like bathtub'는 'didn't like taking baths'로 바꾸면 더 자연스러워요.
2. 'find'는 과거형으로 'found'로 고쳐야 해요.
3. 'ended up back' 대신 'ended up in the bathroom again'가 더 명확해요.