Re: Caillou summary (Yulia)

[Teacher Winget]

The cartoon title is "Caillou in the Bathtub."
Caillou had to take a bath, but Caillou didn't want to take a bath because Caillou wanted to play. So Caillou hided hid in Rosie's room. But his mom found him. Caillou had no choise choice but to go to the bathroom. Caillou wanted right thermal the right temperature water. His mom controlled the temperature. Suddenly, Caillou ran away, but Caillou was bumped bumped into his dad. So Caillou was going went to the bathroom again. Caillou entered in to into the bathtub. Caillou thought the bath was not fun. Mom made bubbles. Caillou wanted to have his ducky, so Caillou went to Rosie's room. Caillou brought his ducky to his bathtub. Now, Caillou took a bath enjoy enjoyed the bath. Time passed, and Caillou had to come out of the bathtub. Caillou wanted to stay and play in the bathtub. Mom said, "Let's take a bath tomorrow too!" So Caillou will take a bath again!

Score: B+

Tips:

1. 'hided'는 'hid'로 수정해야 해요.
2. 'choise'는 'choice'로, 철자에 주의해 주세요.
3. 'was bumped' 대신 'bumped'가 더 자연스러워요.