<p>Ali Baba was a woodcutter in the mountains.</p><p>One day, Ali Baba saw forty thieves and one thief whispered, <b>"Open Sesame!"</b></p><p><s>And</s> <b>Then</b> a magic door opened.</p><p>The cave was full of treasure!</p><p>Ali took some jewels and raced home to tell the story.</p><p>His older brother didn't believe Ali's story.</p><p><s>So he went to the magic door, opened with the magic words.</s> <b>So he went to the magic door and opened it with the magic words.</b></p><p>Ali Baba saw the shining trail and <s>made the trail circle back</s> <b>made it circle back</b> to the magic door.</p><p>That night, the thieves saw the shining trail, and they all began to fight.</p><p><b>Score: A-</b></p><p><b>Tips)</b><br>문장 처음에 And 대신 Then을 쓰면 더 자연스러워요 👍<br>it을 쓰면 같은 말을 반복하지 않아도 돼요 😊</p><p> </p>
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