커버레터 평가부탁/실제쓴글,컴앞대기요!

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3학년이구요, 에세이 기말평가과제라 써봤습니다.
가상이라 회사이런건 신경쓰지마시구요 -ㅁ-;
커버레터 형식보며 최대한 써봤는데 ㅠㅠ 영 ..;
글구성이나, 오타나 문법같은거 거침없이 리플좀 달아주세요 ㅠ
복받으실 거예요.. ㅠㅜ


Donddo Apt. #501, 943-13,
ShinJeong-dong, Yangcheon-gu, Seoul, 158-059

May 22, 2007

Mr. Han In su
Personnel Director
50 Euljiro2-ga
Jung-gu, Seoul 100-758

Position : Marketing assistant related Customer service

Dear Mr. Han

I am applying for the above position as advertised in the Web site. Enclosed is my resume for your review and consideration.

I am very interested in a position where I can use my knowledge. I developed the traits which you require most : leadership coupled with an ability to be a "team player." and tenacity a mission with more challenge. Although I majored in English, my undergraduate studies covered a wide range of subject with concentrations in economics, marketing, research. I believe I have a strong business background, and I would be an asset to your company.

As you can see from my resume, I worked full time during the summers and part-time during the school year. I earned one third of my tuition fees. By working with many kinds of people, I have learned to be adaptive, to communicate with people on all levels and to work harmoniously with them.

Also, I can offer a quick learning style with strong competency in analysis. In addition, I I am confident that my education, computer literacy and interpersonal skills will be an asset to AMOREPACIFIC.

I would very much appreciate the opportunity to meet with you personally so that we may further explore how my assets and genuine enthusiasm may best be utilized to the benefit of your company.
I will call you later this week to confirm‎ that you have received my resume.

Sincerely yours,

Jang Hye Min
Encl.

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잘 썼네요..몇군데..문법적 에러가 있긴 하지만...아!..마지막 문장에 나중에 전화한다고 하기보다는 인터뷰하는 기회를 가졌음 한다고 쓰는게 더 공손(?) 한 표현일듯...