<p>One day, Ruby, Max, and their grandmother were preparing <b>a</b> tea party for <b>Grandma's</b> friends. Max <b><s>wanted to decorate the bug on flowers</s></b> <b>wanted to put bugs on the flowers for decoration,</b> but Ruby refused <b><s>it</s></b> <b>this idea</b>. Grandma told him to give her some <b>mint</b> for lemonade. Max brought a <b><s>ladybudg</s></b> <b>ladybug</b> with <b>the</b> mint again.</p><p>Max brought a lot of <b><s>straberries</s></b> <b>strawberries</b> that Ruby really wanted for her salad. <b><s>The all of the breads were finished baking</s></b> <b>All the bread had finished baking</b>. Then <b>Grandma's</b> friends came, and Ruby realized that <b>the ladybugs were in the food</b>. What a funny story!</p><p> </p><p>Score: <b>B+</b></p><p><b>Tips)</b></p><ol style="list-style-type: decimal;" data-ke-list-type="decimal"><li><b>문법</b>: "wanted to decorate the bug on flowers" 대신 "wanted to put bugs on the flowers for decoration"이라고 해야 하고, "straberries" 대신 "strawberries"라고 해야 자연스럽습니다.</li><li><b>내용 추가</b>: "Ruby가 어떻게 문제를 해결했는지와 다른 사람들의 반응을 설명해 보세요!"</li></ol>
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