<p>I'm going to introduce <b>"Max and Ruby"</b> today. <b><s>Then let's get started</s></b> <b>Let's begin</b>. The first story is called <b>"Max's Insect Salad."</b> One day, Max, Ruby, and their grandmother were <b>preparing</b> a tea party for <b>Grandma's</b> friend. Max wanted to put bugs on the flowers, but Ruby <b><s>doesn't</s></b> <b>didn't</b> allow it. Grandma <b><s>wanted to give her friends lemonade mint</s></b> <b>wanted to serve mint lemonade to her friends</b>, but Max brought <b>a</b> ladybug <b>instead</b>. When the party was ready and Grandma's friends came over to eat, Ruby realized that a ladybug was <b>in the food</b>. <b><s>episode 1 is finished so l introduce about episode 2 start!!</s></b> <b>That was the end of episode 1. Now, let me introduce episode 2!</b></p><p>Score: <b>B+</b></p><p><b>Tips)</b></p><ol style="list-style-type: decimal;" data-ke-list-type="decimal"><li><b>문법</b>: "doesn't" 대신 "didn't"라고 해야 하고, "wanted to give her friends lemonade mint" 대신 "wanted to serve mint lemonade to her friends"라고 해야 자연스럽습니다.</li><li><b>내용 추가</b>: "왜 Max가 벌레를 사용하고 싶어했는지와 Ruby의 반응이 이야기에 어떤 영향을 미쳤는지 더 설명해 보세요!"</li></ol>
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