영어 1분 자기소개서예요~~ 칼질 부탁드려요..ㅜ.ㅜ 많이 급해요,,ㅠ,ㅠ

[비가인]

First of all, thank you for giving this opportunity for applying this job.

I'm very glad to meet you and happy to introduce myself to you.

My name is ㅇㅇㅇ applying for technical and sales team in Dongsung Chemical as a professional technician.

My major is Chemistry Engineering and I'm going to graduate from ㅇㅇㅇ university this year.

During the collegiate life, I was a vice chairman of Chemistry Engineering Student's Association and I could gain the

leadership and interpersonal skills through this kind of experience.

I'm very active and positive person and I want to express my passion in Dongsung Chemical.

If I can get a pass in this interview and work in Dongsung Chemical. I will do my best to learn and study continuously

and will be a great asset of Dongsung in the future. 

중견기업 인데요~ 영어 면접이 있어서요~ 너무 평범한가요?? ㅠ.ㅠ

그리고 국문으로 1분 자기소개 하려면 다르게 해야되나요?? 어찌해야 될지 잘 몰라서요~

잘 부탁드립니다..

[콩씨]

잘모르겟지만 opportunity to get a job interview 이방법은 어때요

[비가인]

감사합니다.ㅎ 근데 this 다음에 opportunity to get a job interview 이렇게 수정해라는건가요?

[redmoo]

밑에 영작게시판 있습니다. 거기에 고수님들 많아요~~

[huiran]

혹시 영어면접관중에 원어민도 있나요? 면접경력이 많은 원어민은 아마 첫 부분만 봐도 금방 알 것 같은데요.. 인상을 줄 수 있는 걸로 하세요..