Re: Summary[Siwoo]

[Teacher1]

Caillou went on a picnic with his family and his friend**.**
After they arrived, he and his friend ate and played**.**
They cut tree branch play knight and dragon cut tree branches and played Knight and Dragon.
But his parent parents called him and his friend**.**
When they went**, it** was raining and lighting was raining and lightning, so
they avoid the cave avoided the cave.
But his sister was afraid of lighting the lightning sound**.**
He and his friend relieve relieved her playing brave knight by playing Brave Knights.
Soon**,** raining and lighting stopped the rain and lightning stopped and the sun came.

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점수: A-

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Tips)

• "lighting" → "lightning": 번개는 lightning이에요! (lighting은 '조명'이라는 뜻이니 조심!)

• "cut tree branch" → "cut tree branches": 여러 개의 나뭇가지니까 branches처럼 복수로 써요.

• "relieve → relieved": 과거 이야기니까 동사도 과거형으로!

• "avoid the cave" → 비를 피하려고 **"went into the cave"**처럼 써도 자연스러워요.

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Tips) "용감한 기사 놀이"를 어떻게 했는지 조금 더 자세히 쓰면 더 흥미진진해져요 😊