Re: summary 정승빈

[Teacher1]

Cailou Caillou and dad Dad go to the park.

cailou and dad together Riveride Caillou and Dad rode the River Ride together.

and go to eat dessert Then, they went to eat dessert.

cailou and dad teddy bear doll game Caillou and Dad played a teddy bear game.

but cailou and dad lose But Caillou and Dad lost.

cailou is best game teddy bear Caillou really wanted to win the teddy bear game.

the cartoon is story interesting The cartoon's story is interesting.

Score: C

Tips)

1. 제목과 이름은 항상 대문자로 시작해요.
   (Always capitalize titles and names like "Caillou.")
2. "Riveride"는 "River Ride"로 수정하고 문장을 자연스럽게 고쳐보세요.
   (Fix "Riveride" to "River Ride" and improve sentence flow.)
3. "cailou and dad teddy bear doll game"는 "Caillou and Dad played a teddy bear game"으로 고쳐요.
   (Rewrite "cailou and dad teddy bear doll game" as "Caillou and Dad played a teddy bear game.")
4. 이야기를 풍부하게 하려면 게임에서 졌을 때의 감정이나 아빠와 함께한 즐거운 순간을 추가해 보세요.
   (To enrich the story, add emotions about losing the game or fun moments with Dad.)