[Corrected] living in foreign country

[Jim Lee]

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I went to Pyung-Tak to do something on last Saturday. I do not usually drive to go long distances because don't like to traffic jam on the road and see the synery out of the window. I usually got train in case of travel. I took a train at Seoul station to go Pyung-Tak on July, 9th. And in 40 minutes, I got off at Pyung-Tak station. I returned to Pyung -Tak station as I finished my work in Pyung -Tak. When I waited the train to board, I saw two Americans, a man and woman, there. They looked like a couple and 20's. They looked tired because of hot weather. In a moment, I went to store to buy a mineral water. When I drunk water in the store, the man entered the store. He looked for something to drink. He didn't look like to know well Korean. When he didn't decide what to buy, I told him first "Can I help you?". Anyway, we were talking about beverage in a moment, The man bought what he wanted to get, and then he returned to his wife. I knew that they were working and have lived for a short time in Korea. So they didn't know Korean language and cutural and tired much due to tense. If we live in foreign country, we will be also tired to many things. But someone help us a little, we feel better to live.	I went to Pyung-Tak to do something on last Saturday. I do not usually drive to go long distances because I don't like to the traffic jams. on the I like to look at the road and see the synery scenery out of the window. I usually travel by got train in case I have to go far of travel. I took a train at Seoul station to go Pyung-Tak on July, 9th. And in 40 minutes, I got off at Pyung-Tak station. I returned to Pyung -Tak station as I finished my work in Pyung -Tak. When I waited for the train to board, I saw two Americans, a man and woman, there. They looked like a couple and in their 20's. They looked tired because of the hot weather. In a moment, I went to a store to buy a mineral water. When I was drinking drunk the water in the store, the man entered the store. He looked for something to drink. He didn't look like he can speak Korean well to know well Korean. When he was looking for a drink didn't decide what to buy, I said to him told him first "Can I help you?". Anyway, we started were talking about beverage in a moment, The man bought what he wanted to get, and then he returned to his wife. I knew that they were working and have lived for a short time in Korea. So they didn't know Korean language and cuture al and were tired much due to tense. If we lived in a foreign country, we would will also be also tired from to many things. But if someone helps us a little, we would feel better to live.
Comment: Great writing!  Personal Comment: I think it was nice of you to help the Americans.