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Today our class and a few other classes wnet to this really big outdoor theme park.

The bus ride was horrible due to me, me and my friend went to buy drinks since we

didnt bring any from home so we spent some money getting drinks, no big deal right?

well. turns out the drink was shaking in my bag while i was getting on the bus, then

at the exact moment i opend the drink it exploded. this was probably the worst thing

that happend that day. overall the bus ride itself was pretty nice, im just saying that

because i snoozed while on the bus.

when we arrived we had to take pictures for memory or something so we took

pictures, nothing really intresting happend while taking pictures.

but when we went inside the park i was in heaven. we bought some cat ears, not

actuall cat ears just thone cat ear headbands that they have everywhere, i got made

for at for buying buying them and wearing them litteraly the intire day but after a while

everyone started to exept the fact that i was destined to be a cat.

we rode a few rollercoasters and a few other rides but what really made my day was..

t express it was the most hyped ride on the intire park the line was hell. but the ride

was awesome.

and yeah that was basically my day, one of the best days of many and many more to come.

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