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안녕하세여..이건 제가 한 영작인데여.. 영화보고 쓰라고 해서 쓰긴 썼는데 제 영작 실력이 너무 나뻐서서요 문법면에서 특히 넘 부졸하거든여... 제발 조언좀 해주시고 고쳐야 될 부분좀 알려주세여.. please Director Steven Spielberg is one of the most famous a director in USA. Through his life he devoted himself to make good film. He also made lot a science movie. Especially lot of his movie deal with science development. However, even if many of his movies deal with the idea of development in science, it seems like he tried to criticized the science invention that affect the provision of natures and peoples error judgment on science development. Some people believed that they could over come the how nature works on our life. First movie I like to talk about is ET, this movie is one of most famous movie and also made Steven Spielberg became very famous through its spectacular idea on his creature a alien, this fantasy science movie made in 1982. Through the movie, he tried to show that man shouldn’t break the provision of nature. It is about one alien name E.T who used to live in planet visited the earth and concentrated on plants he found in the earth and couldn’t go back to planet by mistake. Fortunately, while he was left alone, he met a boy name Elliott who has warm mind and he took ET to his house tried to keep him safely. Through the movie Steven Spielberg described young Elliott as a person who except the creature as a important live like a human, and tried to take care of him and they became a good friend however unlike Eliott. When other man found about the ET , they did not regarded ET as a creature whose value is same as same as human l, instead they tried to took him to their research institute, they saw the ET as a certain creature which they can study or control with , and as a result, ET died, through this scene Steven tried to supported the idea that people shouldn’t tried to change the provision of nature. ET is part of creature that made buy nature just like us and nobody have right to control once life. Elliot respected his subsistence and tried to find the way to get bad in to his own home d but on the contrary grown up, they did not care about send him to the planet instead they tried to captured him in order to study him. but it only brought them a death of ET it self, however ET revived when Elliots teals touches the ET; and Elliot could send him back to his house . On this movie, Steven Spielberg regarded Elliot as person who excepts the provision of nature and grown up as a person who against the nature and through the alien name ET director supported his idea Second movie I like to talk about is ‘Jurassic park’ whish is also directed by Steven Spielberg in 1993. Through the movie, like a we already seen throuth he once again create a his own creatures and this time its not alien but it dinosaur and through the dinosaur he once again criticized the human who think they can control the provision of nature. In the scene., a rich businessman name john Hammond construct the Jurassic park on the island of Kostalica., which is actually for lived dinosaur, He could revive the dinosaurs through gathering the dinosaurs DNA into the fossil and combined it with the genes. All this process was able to accomplished by science invention. through this scene we can see how people tried to against the provision of nature. Dinosaur had been vanished long time ago by provision of however, in the movie, man thought he could bring back their life and be able to make them to live with human. However, the result shown on this movie proved mans error judgment. In the scene, tragic start right after the park finished to constructed. A man who works in the park got killed while he was on the way to deliver the one of dinosaurs to the park. The tragic doesn’t stop at here. One of engineering who also woks at the park plans to sell fertilized egg with expensive price, and in order to hided the some fertilized egg away from park he suspend the computer system which running on the park and held to protect the people from danger. However, this greed engineering ignored all those rules in order to get money. On the way to escape, hurricane begins and dinosaurs were being able to got out from the cage and start to destroy the park. Dinosaur experts who had been asked to examine the security on park and two children who joined with the expert just for touring the park trapped in to the park and had to find the way to got away from the danger of dinosaur’s attack. The plot supported the idea of man who has to obey the provision of nature. For example, Jurassic park created by the man, but at the end, not only they couldn’t even controlled the their creatures but it only caused them to have danger. There is always some reasons why some creature had been extinct and I believed only god have right to create creature but if man tried to break the role, there will be always responsible which you have to recover. I think though the Jurassic park Steven tried to support this idea. Third movie I like to talk about i is “back to the future”. This movie is one of my favorites from ever since it came out to l now. This movie was made in 1994. Through this movie, you will start to understand the possibility of traveling past and future. This movie is also deal with fantasy idea by creating time machine however through the invention of time machine. Director once again criticized the humans ignorance on provision of nature. Through the movie director tried to tell the idea that creating a time machine is more than traveling different time. The story start from a Main character Marty who just has normal life except he has a scientist friend who believed to make time machine to travel past or future. However, it happed in practices and one day martyr send back to past in 1950 by mistake. As a result, the problems start to begin. Unfortunately, when he send back to past time accidentally machine had been broken thus he couldn’t came back to present thus he had to fine a way to fix the time machine in order to get back to present time. In addition, When he send back to the past he met his parent who are teenagers on the past and his mom fall in to Marty. Since she doesn’t know who he really is and through those situation Marty realize that his mom feeling for him might change his life more than he worried, on other word, her moms toward on Marty might make Marty even not being existed in the future which is actually present for Marty .As his mom fall more in to Marty, picture of his family which he brought from present time start to disappear. In order to solve the problems Marty had find the way to make their parent fall in to each others. Or else he will be disappeared and his life wouldn’t exist any longer. Steven created time machine in this movie thus people will be able to travel the time however he did not just talked about invention of time machine. Because of him and I though it really would be really great if this really happening however invention of time machine is amazing and what lot of people had dreamed of however though the movie director tried to show the problems that might committed and responsibility on their actions. . Being send back to past is very great in some case but as a result he brought the whole new problems In the movie a man invent the time machine to travel the time and it shows that man tried to against the how nature works it also shows that man tried to disobey the provision of nature, what you have now what you are going to deserve is all resulted by what you have done on your past or present an that is how life going and people can’t do nothing about it , but in the movie , through the making time machine they broke the rules and it brought a some problems that you have to deal with. thorough time machine man tried to conquest the provision of nature. Some how people could taste the extraordinary things but they also had to face the hard problems. The idea of these lessons kept continued on future and through the ‘Back to the future II’, director supported the idea.. Continue from the ‘Back to the future I ;.Marty could get back to the present from past but the time traveling didn’t stop at here. When he got in to the present doc, once again tell him that he must go to future to charge his sons future who will have trouble in future. In order to change his sons future life he goes to future by time machine. This time he travels through flying time machine. When he got in to future he could rescue his son from getting tin trouble however once again serious problems happened through character name biff, when Marty got into the future he bought a get back to present, however he realized it was dangerous idea by doc. However, bliff found about the time machine and he go back to the past in 1955 and gave the sport magazine to young Bliff, teenager of himself. After mission, when Marty got back to the present whole universe had been changed horribly. Bliff got the power and money but marty’s life had been destroyed. Once again, in order to save his life Marty had to go back to past, time in 1995. ‘ Back to the future II’ also deals with Idea of time travel. once again character doc develop the quality of time machine. The machine even flying on the sky and is able to travel faster, but its result brought a more serious problems. once again he ignore the provision of nature it might be nice it people can change their future for their own good but it is against the natures circulation what they deserve is what they deserve on future is what they deserve, even if Marty tried to protect his son, his action was against the provision of nature he though he will able to fix the future but that kept brought the serious problems. To solve all his problems Marty had to had to keep travel back and force. Even if Steven brought the Idea of time traveling and invention of time machine, he concerned about problems caused by time machine, once again he emphasized the importance of provision of nature. Final movie I like to talk about is minority report also directed by Steven Spielberg most recently on 2002. The set of this movie is held on future time in the year 2050 in Washington DC. According to the movie, minority report is the system which is made to capture killer, in other world this system can predict the future crime by three psychic, thus before crime committed, cop can arrest the criminal. And since people who have charge in this system, in clued main character, Johns Anderston ,deeply believed that this system never be wrong, they don’t ever bother to arrested the people who were accused for criminal list even if actual crime haven’t been committed. Cop ,Jonh is also one of victim who lost his child by some killer and since than he dedicates all his life to capture killers and punish them. Through the technology, cop can detected the criminal and people, who are accused on this system, get punished no matter what happen. Every crime is depending on this system. However one day through the image john found out that he will be the murder of somebody whom he doesn’t even knows ,and other cop start to chase him . John who used to have no doubt on the system believed that something had definitely got wrong. To prove is innocent plans to escape. Once again through this movie Steven spilberg tried to criticized the technology invention which even think they can predict the future and can control the provision of nature. Main character John was the person who deeply believes the minority report, and trusted system got him in to trouble when became the criminal. He doesn’t believe the system. Through this movie director tried to show mans error judgment on science development. People in this movie believed that they can predict the future, but future is not something you can predicted future always can be changed but in the movie people did not considered about this fact they thought they can control the future however this idea brought a tragic result to main character. Once again, director supported the idea through this movie. Steven Spielberg in one of my favorite director and he had been made a lot a amazing movies. Especially his fantasy movie more than just movie and as time goes its technology, which is used, on his movie being developed. However, even if he deal with all those fantasy world and science invention, he always seems like tried to tell us how provision of nature is equality important in terms of living,