Should euthanasia be allowed or not?

[햄토리]

today, during change the world many immedicable illnessess are appear.

so patients are choose eutahnasia percent are improve.

so I think euthanasia is be allowed.

because... first, when the patients are be hopeless,

it is need to euthanasia for doesn't feel the severe pain.

it is improtant to family opinion but............ 

above all things it is that own want... but it is important thing because of there are in the life and death.

so it is decide the law, and when the patient of life percent is low, also patient get the sugery... it is not okay, you can use this law.

Second, when the patient is old and hasn't family and no money. it may be need to euthanasia. these like the situations are a lot of. so uncondition to euthanasia is not allowed is violates their personal freedom.(not moral). 

of all things I think we have to develope the medicine effect, sugery skill, improve the medical also we have to find the another way.

Inconclusion, we should research the medical, and low the euthanasia percent.

(it is if they want.) 

[Danny]

(CAPITALIZE the first letter of a sentence)

today, during change the world-->Today, in our changing world
many immedicable illnessess are appear-->many immedicable illnesses are appearing
so patients are choose eutahnasia percent are improve-->So the number of patients who choose euthanasia is growing
so I think euthanasia is be-->So I think euthanasia should be
because... first, when the patients are be hopeless-->Because first, when patients are hopeless
it is need to euthanasia for doesn't feel-->euthanasia is needed so they don't feel

[Danny]

it is improtant to family opinion-->It is an important family opinion
it is that own want-->They must want it
it is important thing because of there are in the life and death-->it is an important thing because it is about life or death
so it is decide the law, and when the patient of life percent is low-->So it should be decided by law, and when the patient's health is low
also patient get the sugery... it is not okay,-->and they get surgery, but they are not okay,
hasn't family and no money-->has no family or money
it may be need to euthanasia-->euthanasia may be needed

[Danny]

these like the situations are a lot of-->There are a lot of situations
so uncondition to euthanasia is not allowed is violates their personal freedom.(not moral)-->(I don't understand)
of all things-->Of all things,
develope the medicine effect, sugery skill, improve the medical also we have to find the another way-->develop effective medicine and surgery skills, improve medicine and other things
Inconclusion, we should research the medical-->In conclusion, we should research medicine
and low the euthanasia percent. (it is if they want.)-->(I don't understand)