<p>Max and Ruby <b><s>were took</s></b> <b>took</b> the bus to buy <b>work clothes.</b></p><p>Max wanted to buy a dragon shirt, but Ruby refused <b><s>his question</s></b> <b>his request.</b></p><p>While Ruby <b>was trying on clothes,</b> Max <b><s>was followed</s></b> <b>followed</b> the dragon shirt.</p><p><b><s>And Max following the dragon shirt, Ruby wanted to find him but she didn't.</s></b><br>As Max kept following the dragon shirt, Ruby tried to find him but couldn’t.</p><p>They <b><s>acted repeatedly</s></b> <b>did this repeatedly. Finally, they met!</b></p><p>While Ruby <b><s>found in place of the dragon shirt</s></b> <b>was looking for a place to return the dragon shirt,</b> Max <b><s>attentioned for</s></b> <b>noticed</b> the chocolate ice cream.</p><p><b><s>And then, Max smear the chocolate icecream on dragon shirt.</s></b><br>Then, Max <b>smeared</b> chocolate ice cream on the dragon shirt.</p><p>So, they <b><s>bought</s></b> <b>ended up buying</b> Max's dragon shirt.</p><p>I <b><s>wandering</s></b> <b>wonder</b> how everyone <b><s>know for Max</s></b> <b>knew about Max.</b></p><p><b>Score: B+</b></p><p><b>Tips)</b></p><ol style="list-style-type: decimal;" data-ke-list-type="decimal"><li><b>문법</b>: "were took" 대신 "took," "attentioned for" 대신 "noticed," "smear" 대신 "smeared"라고 해야 자연스럽습니다.</li><li><b>내용 추가</b>: Ruby가 Max의 행동에 대해 어떻게 반응했는지와 Max가 셔츠를 어떻게 엉망으로 만들었는지 더 자세히 설명해 보세요!</li></ol>
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