Re: Caillou summary-Adam

[Teacher Winget]

The title is "Caillou Goes to a Theme Park."

Caillou arrived theme park arrived at the theme park.

Caillou first chose go to Niagara falls river to go on the Niagara Falls River ride.

Caillou sit on the tube sat on the tube.

Caillou is fun had fun but felt a little scared.

And His family ate dessert Afterward, his family ate dessert.

Caillou ate cotton candys candy, and Daddy and Mommy ate cotton candy's candy too.

Caillou ride theme park high in there. wheels rode the Ferris wheel, which went very high.

Caillou want to got wanted to get a teddy bears.throw hoops and put the can bear by throwing hoops and knocking down cans.

Caillou got won a big teddy bear.

And Caillou's came home Then, Caillou and his family went home.

The story is funny.

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Score: B+

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Tips):

1. 문법과 표현:

   • "arrived theme park" → "arrived at the theme park"
   • "sit on the tube" → "sat on the tube"
   • "is fun" → "had fun"
   • "cotton candys" → "cotton candy"

2. 내용 추가하기:

   • Niagara Falls River에서 Caillou가 느낀 점을 더 묘사해 보세요.
   • 테디베어를 받았을 때 Caillou와 가족의 기쁨을 추가하면 이야기가 더 흥미로워질 것입니다.

3. 문장 연결:

   • 문장을 부드럽게 연결하기 위해 "Then," "Finally," 같은 연결어를 사용해 보세요.