Re: Max&Ruby David.

[Teacher Winget]

Max was playing the a pirate, and Ruby is was playing the a tea party. and Ruby says said Max prepared should prepare the tablecloth, but Max hangs hung his pirate branch flag on a branch.
And Ruby took took back the tablecloth.
And Then, Ruby took a boat, but Max took a boat took the boat instead, so Ruby hung hung up the boat.
But Max took all the dolls, so Ruby hangs retrieved all the dolls.
Ruby goes went home and finds looked for a necklace, and but Ruby's treasure box has lost was lost.
And Then, Ruby told Max, "Let's play pirate."
So Max found a Ruby's necklace and treasure box.

Score: B

Tips)

1. 문법: "Max hangs" 대신 "Max hung"이라고 해야 해요, 그리고 "Ruby's treasure box has lost" 대신 "Ruby's treasure box was lost"라고 해야 해요.
2. 내용 추가: "왜 Ruby가 Max와 함께 해적 놀이를 하기로 했는지 더 설명할 수 있어요. 아마도 보물을 찾고 싶었기 때문일 거예요!"