When I was young, my grandmother looked after me because my parents worked together for a living. In a poor home surroundings, my parents worked so hard and I have been grown as I looked at their life.
-> When I was young, my both parents had a job so I spent most of my childhood with my grandmother. My parents worked really hard to provide me a better environment to grow up (I have ... at their life 까진 무슨 의미인지 잘..).
Thanks to these environments, I was able to have a responsibility for dealing with everything. And also I could have the ablity to overcome when trials approaches.
The most memorable thing throughout school years is that I took part in English speaking contest. -> The most memorable moment is when I gave a talk in front of many people in English speaking contest in my school.
That I did perform well in front of many students without embarrassment is one of the most memorable experiences in my life.
-> I was confident myself in speaking english and this brought me a good result (혹 상을 받으셨다거나..하면..)
My strength is, so to speak, that I´m full of concentration. If some matters is given to me, I concentrate on these things. Even I don´t know time goes by because of this. With my power of concentration, I release when I should finish thoroughly and speedily what I do something. Because of this personality, I always hear from people that I´m exact in my work. Thus, these are the very huge strengthes that I have.
On the other hand, my weakness is that I have a personality of blood type A´s style. Of course, Gauging one´s personality giving blood types is wrong but an inclination that I become shy when I first time meet someone is similar to the style of blood type A. I made up for this weak point as I joined the military service and took charge of the leader of my class. I will do my best to become perfectly.
-> On the other hand, my weakness is that I could be shy when I talk to people in the first instance. However, I have overcome my shyness when I was in military service and this led me to become a leader of my team.
My school life - I was a hunter who want to catch both rabbits.
I think that the university´s life is kind of small societies.
-> 무슨 뜻인지.. ;;
I returned to school and changed my major in 2005 after finishing military service.
-> I went to back to my university and changed my mojor (school은 고등학교 까지만을 학교라고 해요)
In 2006, I took charge of my major as a leader for 1 years. I already did when I was a freshman, but at this time I had to be responsible for my major, not for my class. So I ran and worked with a responsibility. Thanks to this effort, I could finish safely and learn a qualification as a leader. And also I could fix my weakness. I wasn´t inclined to working in my major, but I studied so hard that I got over GPA 4.0 in spring semester,2006.
Applicate inducement and aspiration - If a person works hard what he is interested in, he can how his real ability.
When people do what they are really interested in, they can enjoy working and show the best ability. As I´m a person who love an english, I think that looking for a job that is related to my major is desirable.
-> Im very attracted by thte language, English so I am really looking forward to getting a job related to my major in English.
While I was worried about my future job, I really wanted to make the most of my major and aptitude, and also work in the fields that are active around the world. So I decided to choose a field that is related to Trade. My major is English literature, so I know I have a poor knowledge at Trade or Business. But I think I can make up for this through an intensive studying after I get a job. I will work like a horse with a perservance and a tenacity and run toward my sucess. With infrangible moral strength and absorptive power like a sponge, I want to be a competent person in your company.
과가 영문과인데도 참 영어자소서 쓰기가 참 힘들네요. 고수님들 한번 봐주세요...ㅠ 그리고 내용면에서 좀더 좋은 것이 있으면 좀 부탁드려요.^^