[Corrected] Time flies like an arrow.

[Jim Lee]

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Time flies like an arrow. I think early two thousand four year is like yesterday but it becomes already august of two thousand four year. Today I look back my early purpose. This year I will never forget about my life. I entered the university this year. And my eyes gets bright through lasic surgery. Of course, Jesus helps it. I tried my best to improve my English this year. But I left my the rest of my purpose. I will get my driver's license. I will apply for katusa army. I go to katusa I want to have the chance to talk to American army. First of all, I want to make my pocket money not to put my burden to my parents. and I care for my health. Sure I will study English everyday little by little. I will keep my promise.	Time flies by so fast  like an arrow. I think early part of two thousand and four year seems like only is like yesterday but it becomes is already aAugust of two thousand and four year. Today I looked back on my early purpose. This year I will never forget about my life. I entered the university this year. And my eyes got brighter gets bright through a lasic surgery. Of course, Jesus helpeds it me. I tried my best to improve my English this year. But I have not been able to achieve my other purposes yet left my the rest of my purpose. I want to will get my driver's license. I will apply for the KATUSA katusa army. When I go to KATUSA katusa I want to have the chance to talk to American soldiers  army. First of all, I want to make my own mney and pocket money not to put my the burden to my parents. and I will care for my health. Sure I will study English everyday little by little. I will keep my promise.
Comment: Great writing!  Personal Comment: You are doing well…just continue to do what you do..and you will be all right.