<p>This story is called <b>"Caillou Sleeps Over."</b></p><p>Caillou and his mom <s>are packing</s> → <b>packed</b> his bag<br>because he <s>sleeps to his friend's house</s> → <b>was going to sleep at his friend's house</b>.</p><p>Caillou was very excited.</p><p>But Caillou forgot his <s>taddy bare</s> → <b>teddy bear</b>.<br>Caillou went back and took his teddy bear.</p><p>Then he went to his friend's house.</p><p>He liked to play in the tree house.</p><p>Caillou <s>eat yammyly</s> → <b>ate happily</b>.<br>Then he brushed his teeth and went to bed.</p><p>Caillou wanted to see his mom and dad.<br>Caillou was very sad.</p><p>Caillou <s>call to his mom</s> → <b>called his mom</b>.<br>Caillou wanted to go home.</p><p>But Caillou hugged his <s>tabby</s> → <b>teddy</b> and slept over.</p><hr data-ke-style="style1"><p><b>Score: B</b></p><hr data-ke-style="style1"><p><b>Tips)</b></p><ul style="list-style-type: disc;" data-ke-list-type="disc"><li><p><b>철자 주의</b>: taddy bare → teddy bear, tabby → teddy, yammyly → happily</p></li><li><p><b>과거형 사용</b>: eat → ate, call → called처럼 이야기에서는 과거형을 써야 해요.</p></li><li><p><b>이야기 흐름</b>: Caillou가 슬퍼했지만 테디를 안고 이겨낸 장면이 잘 표현됐어요! 🧸🏡😊</p></li></ul><p>동휘 정말 잘했어요! 다음에는 문장을 조금 더 천천히 쓰면서 정리하면 더 멋진 글이 될 거예요! 👏🌟</p>
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