Re: Max & Ruby - Felix

[Teacher Winget]

Grandma picked cherries for her tea party. Max was followed Bug was following a bug, but Grandma said to pick any pretty things for the party. He brought many pretty things, but there was a ladybug in the things among them. So, Grandma gave some lemonade to Max and had him sit down on the chair. While he ate drank lemonade and had snacks, Ruby and Grandma made the salad. When Grandma didn't sea anything from the gas wasn't watching the stove, she request to Max that put the special ingrediant asked Max to put the special ingredient in the salad. But he put bug jelly instead. Fortunately, everyone liked his salad.

Score: B+

Tips)

1. 문법: "was followed Bug" 대신 "was following a bug"라고 해야 하고, "ate lemonade" 대신 "drank lemonade"라고 해야 자연스럽습니다.
2. 내용 추가: "Max가 왜 벌레 젤리를 사용했는지, 그리고 그것이 이야기에 어떤 영향을 주었는지 설명을 추가해 보세요!"