I was born in Chonju where is famous for boiled rice with assorted mixtures. I have been hearing that I have to be honest from my parent. So I could get my sense of value that the honesty and sincerity are most important in life. Sometimes, too much honesty makes somebody consider me to be foolishly honest but, that is why i am recognized as a young man of promise.
I am clear whether I like or not. it looks like a single-minded person, but it is good character to do best for my dream. I guess, It is most important to do best for clearly object in work and I did. If I get a job in your company I will have aim to improve English and learn valuable working-level knowledge.
When i was a child, i liked motor sports, and i have considerably been interested in motor vehicle and mechanic since that time. So, i entranced into the university and majored in mechanical engineering at university. Now I am realizing my dreams at there
when i studied mechanical engineering at university, i joined to a club where students design and manufacture a car. in the club, I was a team-leader. So I led a member of that club and i managed every single stuff from designing a car through 3D program (CATIA) to drawing up a plan and manufacturing by myself. during the process of manufacturing, i couldn’t get enough sleep to get a good car and I have to eat noodle because of not enough money But, i have done. I didn’t give up and had an experience to participate in a competition. In addition, while i was serving military service, i obtained the certificate in mechanic.
when I was in Australia, i have worked for custom coaches with three of Australian and one of English for 5 months. It was a good experience for me to get a wide mental horizon. now I am trying to get a job in a global company like AVL. working for your company will be provide me with pleasure and self-satisfaction. And I am certain that I will help you improve. I love to be active and proactive, so I want to use that personality to work abroad. therefore, i would like to work for your company.
thanking you most sincerely for your time and consideration.
첫댓글 너무 짧고 기초적인 문법과 표현력이 많이 걸리네요.ㅠㅠㅋ
고쳐드리고 싶어도 자잘한것들이 너무 많아요.. 일단 ms 워드로만 작성하셔도 어느정도 수정이 가능할만 한 것들인데..