Re: Caillou summary Joy

[Teacher Winget]

The book's title is Caillou's Teddy Shirt.
The main character is Caillou.
One day, Caillou's sister wear wore a Teddy shirt. The shirt is was Caillou's favorite shirt.
Caillou don't gave didn't give the shirt to his sister.
But the size is not same wasn't the same for Caillou.
At last, Caillou gave his shirt to give his favorite doll gave his favorite shirt to his teddy bear. And he feel felt happy.

I think this book is good.

Score: B

Tips:

1. 'wear'는 과거형으로 'wore'로 고쳐주세요.
2. 'is' 대신 과거형인 'was'로 수정해야 해요.
3. Caillou가 느낀 감정을 좀 더 구체적으로 적으면 좋겠어요. 예를 들어, 어떻게 행복해졌는지 설명해 보세요.
4. 추가 설명: 이 책에서 Caillou가 어떻게 자신의 소중한 물건을 나누는 법을 배웠는지에 대해 더 이야기하면 글이 더 흥미로워질 수 있어요!