[Corrected] A diary of the last friday

[Jim Lee]

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My summer vacation is going to an end. For last several days, I used to drunk day by day. That means there's no work I've done and I dump my money throuth the air. It's already Friday and still muggy. I am a member of a club, but I became dislike my club from one day. The reason is that I hate some people. They make me irratated and feel angry . Such uncomfortable people are still existing. And the other reason is I felt bored to care the club's matters. Because, I have a lot of things to do considerably exept them. On the other hand, I decided to stop smoking. because of my health and hygiene problems. I was shocked from states of my body. Stopped it, I would feel drowsy so much. It's hard to stand but ...well, I can't assure whether I could put up with.. I don't mind anyway I could spend money less even though I didn't go through with it. That' all I need. Oh, I'm feeling sleepy now. Whenever I feel this, I regard it as a defficiency of nicotine. I have to go now to smoke, the last tobacco.	My summer vacation is coming going to an end. For the last several days, I got used to drunk day by day. That means that I have not done much work and I have spent a lot of money. there's no work I've done and I dump my money throuth the air. It's already Friday and is still muggy. I am a member of a club, but I came became to dislike my club from the first one day. The reason is that I hate some of the people in it. They irritate me make me irratated and make me feel angry . Such uncomfortable people still exist are still existing. And the other reason is that I felt bored about to taking care the club's matters. Because, I have a lot of other things to do considerably exept them. On the other hand, I decided to stop smoking. because of my health and hygiene problems. I was shocked from the states of my body. Stopped it, I would feel drowsy so much. I feel drowsy after quitting.  It's hard to stand but ...well, I can't be assured whether I could put up with quitting.. I don't mind anyway I could spend money less even though I didn't go through with it. That' all I need. Oh, I'm feeling sleepy now. Whenever I feel this way, I think it’s because of the regard it as a deficiency of defficiency of nicotine in my body. I have to go now to smoke, the last tobacco.
Comment: Good writing!  Personal Comment: I think quitting cigarettes is one of the hardest things to do in life.