Re: Max and Ruby (Alexander)

[Teacher Winget]

Grandmother picked cherries for the tea party, and Ruby put the cherries in her basket.
The bugs came up Max's shoulder A bug crawled onto Max's shoulder.
Grandmother and Ruby made gelatin salad.
Max brang brought a ladybug with the flowers.
Grandmother's friends did not want to see any
bugs on the flowers. Grandmother was going to make lemonade.
Grandmother and Ruby made scones.
Max brang brought a ladybug with the flowers again.
Ruby tried to make the ladybug fly away.
Grandmother's friends did not want to drink lemonade with any bugs in it.
Max gave the mint to Grandmother.
Max brang brought a ladybug with the strawberries.
Max ate the bug salad.
Max put his bug salad in the tea party salad.

Score: A-

Tips)

1. 문법: "brang" 대신 "brought"라고 해야 하고, "Grandmother's friends do not wait to drink any bugs" 대신 "Grandmother's friends did not want to drink lemonade with any bugs in it"라고 해야 자연스럽습니다.
2. 내용 추가: "왜 Max가 벌레 샐러드를 좋아했는지, 그리고 할머니의 친구들이 어떤 반응을 보였는지 더 설명해 보세요!"