Re: Max and Ruby - Ethan

[Teacher Winget]

Ruby and Grandmother picked cherys cherries because they were preparing for the tea party.

While they were picking cherys cherries, Max saw a ladybug.

In the kitchen, they made gelatin desserts.

Max brought a bug to home bug into the house, but their Grandmother's friends didn't like bugs.

Grandmother made tea and needed mint, so Max picked mint.

But Max repeat again to brought kept bringing it with bugs.

When they needed to brought to bring strawberrys strawberries, Max did it again.

Suddenly, Max included bug jelly in gelatines in the gelatin.

Finally, they ate the gelatines gelatin desserts, and they were delicious.

Score: B+

Tips)

1. 문법: "cherys" 대신 "cherries"라고 해야 하고, "Max repeat again to brought" 대신 "Max kept bringing it with bugs"라고 해야 자연스럽습니다.
2. 내용 추가: "Max가 왜 벌레 젤리를 추가했는지에 대한 설명을 더해 보세요!"