Re: Summary caillou Joy 10/12

[Teacher Winget]

The book's title is "Caillou Goes Round the Block." The main character is Caillou.
One day, Caillou ride rode a bike, and he like liked his bike. He looks like a happysaw looked happy and saw his cat. And he saw to saw his mom. He met a his his friend Sarah. She ride was riding a skateboard. She looks like happy looked happy. He go out and he saw a water went out and saw some water. The water had a rain bow had a rainbow.
He felt happy and amazed.

I think this book is good.

Score: B

Tips:

1. 'Ride'는 과거형인 'rode'로, 'like'는 'liked'로 바꿔야 해요. 과거 시제를 사용하면 이야기가 더 자연스러워요.
2. 'looks like a happysaw' 대신 'looked happy and saw'처럼 문장을 깔끔하게 정리하면 좋습니다.
3. 'had a rain bow'는 'had a rainbow'로 수정해야 해요.
4. 추가 팁:각 장면을 조금 더 구체적으로 묘사해 보세요. 예를 들어, Caillou가 무지개를 보았을 때 느꼈던 감정이나 반응을 더 생생하게 묘사하면 독자들이 이야기에 더 몰입할 수 있을 거예요.