Re: Max&Ruby(Luna)

[Teacher Winget]

Camp Out

The title of this book is ‘Max&Ruby Camp Out’ "Max & Ruby Camp Out."

Max and Ruby will sleep outside . Because it’s so hot today because it’s so hot today. But the Max think they sleep at outside Max thinks they will sleep outside, but Ruby said they will sleep at the in a tent. Ruby was excited to sleep at the in the tent. They borrowed some gear for sleep at the to sleep in the tent. When Ruby change changed into the Pajama pajamas, Max filled the tent with his toys. The tent is full of toys, so they sleep at real outside for real.

I think this story is whimsical , because Max is so noty naughty.

Grade: B

Tips:

1. Start each sentence with a capital letter.
2. Ensure subject-verb agreement (Max thinks, not Max think).
3. Correct spelling errors (naughty, not noty).
4. Make sure sentences are complete and clear.