Re: Max and Ruby-Sofia

[Teacher Winget]

Max and Ruby went to the shopping mall to buy clothes.
Max wanted to buy a dragon shirt, but Ruby didn't buy it didn’t want to buy it.
She was looking at the dresses.

While waiting for Ruby, Max found the dragon shirt.
He followed it, and Ruby chased after him.
He arrived at the place where the dragon shirts were. Max put one on.

When Ruby looked for a place to put the clothes back was trying to return some clothes, Max took some ice cream and made the clothes dirty.

Finally, Ruby had to buy the dragon shirt.

Score: A-

Tips)

1. 문법: "didn't buy it" 대신 "didn’t want to buy it"라고 해야 하고, "looked for a place to put the clothes back" 대신 "was trying to return some clothes"라고 해야 자연스럽습니다.
2. 내용 추가: "왜 Ruby가 드래곤 셔츠를 사지 않으려 했는지, 그리고 Max가 어떻게 설득했는지 더 자세히 설명해 보세요!"