Hello Ella J Welcome to my first Euphony presentation class!
Thank you to participate Monday Euphony class and study hard together!
Through this presentation I can figure out how much have you put your efforts for the amazing performance. For the better performance, I would give you some feedbacks^~^
1. Pronunciation
· tini[e]st : [e] sound in the word is more close to [ㅓ] than [ㅣ].
· retu[r]ned : [r] sound is weak.
· th[o]ught : [o] sound is more close to [ㅏ] than [ㅗ].
· ga[th]ered : [th] sound is unclear. If you put more accent on [g], you can more easily pronounce it.
* clo[s]ing : [s] sound in the word is [z] ,not [s]. You did right! Sorry to make you confused T.T
In the case of adjective It pronounce clo[s]e. (ex. I’m clo[s]e with her.)
2. Mission
·Let’s practice more to mirror the intonation on the audio file. Your pronunciation and intonation are already excellent. But, if you creepily mimic the intonation, I firmly believe that you can deliver the perfectly brilliant presentation.
·The presentation got unstable as it went on. Please put more time to memorize and then you’ll not stammer at the end of the presentation. Even you can be free from tension on the stage!
Ella, Your stunning smile and correct posture is worthy of praise by everyone. You already equipped with a capability as a best presenter J Thank you profusely!!