<p><span style="font-size: 12pt;">air conditioner wind is artificial so not good health</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 12pt;">and It cause air-conditioningitis(냉방병)</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 12pt;">example my father many used</span><span style="font-size: 12pt;"> air conditione</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 12pt;">so my father took air-conditioningitis</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 12pt;">so I think many using air conditioner is not good to health</span></p><h3 style="margin: -4px 0px 0px; padding: 0px 100px 0px 13px; overflow: hidden; height: auto; border: 0px; font-size: 20px; font-family: 나눔고딕, nanumgothic, 돋움, dotum; color: rgb(34, 34, 34);"><br></h3><p><span style="font-size: 12pt;"><span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">A</span>ir conditioner wind is artificial. So<span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">, it is</span> not good <span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">for our</span> health.</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 12pt;"><span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">A</span>nd <span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">there are many</span><span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);"> causes in using air </span><span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">conditioner.</span></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 12pt;"><span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">E</span>xample my father <span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">used</span></span><span style="font-size: 12pt;"><span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);"> air conditioner many times.</span><span style="font-size: 12pt; color: rgb(255, 0, 0);"></span><br></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 12pt;"><span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">Sometimes my father not feeling good for staying long time in </span><span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">air-conditioner room.</span><br></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 12pt;">I think, <span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">using many times</span> air conditioner <span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">is not good for our</span><span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);"> </span>health.</span></p><h3 style="margin: -4px 0px 0px; padding: 0px 100px 0px 13px; overflow: hidden; height: auto; border: 0px; font-size: 20px; font-family: 나눔고딕, nanumgothic, 돋움, dotum; color: rgb(34, 34, 34);"><br></h3><p style="margin-left: 2em;"><br></p><p style="margin-left: 2em;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(9, 0, 255); font-family: Arial,sans-serif;">Comments:</span></p><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial,sans-serif;">Hello!
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