Re: Caillou summary (Yulia)

[Teacher Winget]

Caillou was riding his bycicle bicycle. Suddenly, Caillou saw a squirrel. But the squirrel was eating Caillou's cookie. So Caillou called his mom, but his mom was sleeping.

Caillou started to go around the block. While he was walking, Caillou saw a rainbow. He met a girl who was playing hopscotch. As Caillou kept walking, he saw a scary dog. But the girl said, "Don't worry."

Then, Caillou saw a scary crow, so he ran away. Caillou met a lady who knew his parents. The lady showed Caillou a ladybug and gave him something. Finally, Caillou arrived at home and told his mom about his day.

Score: A-

Tips:

• 'bycicle'는 'bicycle'로 고쳐야 해요. 철자에 주의하세요.
• 'saw'는 'looked'보다 자연스럽습니다.
• 'called his mom'은 'told his mom'으로 고치면 더 자연스러워요, 그 상황에서는 말을 건 게 아니라 이야기를 들려준 거니까요.